Woody Allen
I wrote poetry today. Yay!
But I need to let it settle for a little while. I'm also re-drafting a poem that I thought didn't need it when first it was written, but now that I look at it... yes, it does. Good thing I kept the first draft, which really is not that much different in look from its present shape, but I can tell something's off. So, back I go.
Here are the best lines from today's labours, a poem titled, provisionally perhaps, 'Seph tells Dee':
don't pick them before they're ready to be easedOh, it feels good to be writing a poem. It makes sense. The world mutes itself into the background, and the light and the words and the mood come shyly, then strongly forward, and I take my pen and set it all down as best I can.
by gravity, crumpling into the ground
The poem was catalysed by Mike Snider's Jan 27th entry and so I say, blushingly, it is a sonnet, although I use that word roughly.
In fact, I may have pushed it around a bit. Maybe it's now a bruised meta-sonnet, or a pseudo-sonnet, or even a sonnet a lá pomo. Who knows? But it was fun, anyway.